My presentation

WWW:
. Clear voice and projective
. Good analysis of both texts used. (Empire magazine and the website)
. Linked to wider context.

EBI:
. More analysis needed for the website version
. Could have included theorist when needed.

Targets:
. Talk more about the theorist when it seems appropriate as well as expand on the one's I already talked about.
. Even though I believe I gave a detailed analysis I think more is needed on the online version of the magazine.